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Primoral Descent: Drake

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Here one of my OC's from my own story called Primoral Decent.

I have finally have been cranking away on my comic after years of concepting and writhing for the story aaaannnnd... procrastinating and working on anything else I possibly can haha. But after doing on a lot of other comics and freelance work these past years I finally feel confident enough to work on my own Babe.

This is Drake - He is 6'2, a Jerk and ex-pirate, he may not have book smarts but you would be lucky to get one up on him in a card game.

I changed up his design a bit, taking off is facial fuze and replacing it with sideburns and a scar. Added a ponytail and a discolored eye which you really cant see from here. Also I don't know about that logo yet haha we will see.



I hope you guys dig it. Because a lot more coming! :D
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I felt for an image that size and for a cover which is what it appears to be should have more detail in his clothing, physical features, and appearance.

When I saw him the first image that popped into my head was Gaston from Disney's Beauty and the Beast.

After seeing your other color portraits of your characters I felt that this is not a representation of your best efforts and the piece can use more detail.

The white/gray lettering on the side is hard to see as well as the title is close to the tones of the background and may be difficult for some to read.

Perhaps a Gold or embossed look so it stands out more. I really like the other character pictures in your gallery.

This one is not ready to stand alone. Hope the critique helps and keep up the awesome work.