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Primoral Descent: Drakeby *DarkKenjie

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Here one of my OC's from my own story called Primoral Decent.

I have finally have been cranking away on my comic after years of concepting and writhing for the story aaaannnnd... procrastinating and working on anything else I possibly can haha. But after doing on a lot of other comics and freelance work these past years I finally feel confident enough to work on my own Babe.

This is Drake - He is 6'2, a Jerk and ex-pirate, he may not have book smarts but you would be lucky to get one up on him in a card game.

I changed up his design a bit, taking off is facial fuze and replacing it with sideburns and a scar. Added a ponytail and a discolored eye which you really cant see from here. Also I don't know about that logo yet haha we will see.



I hope you guys dig it. Because a lot more coming! :D
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Critique by *Dalequan May 8, 2012, 10:51:11 AM
I felt for an image that size and for a cover which is what it appears to be should have more detail in his clothing, physical features, and appearance.

When I saw him the first image that popped into my head was Gaston from Disney's Beauty and the Beast.

After seeing your other color portraits of your characters I felt that this is not a representation of your best efforts and the piece can use more detail.

The white/gray lettering on the side is hard to see as well as the title is close to the tones of the background and may be difficult for some to read.

Perhaps a Gold or embossed look so it stands out more. I really like the other character pictures in your gallery.

This one is not ready to stand alone. Hope the critique helps and keep up the awesome work.
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Critique by ~Firey-Fox May 8, 2012, 10:35:15 AM
It is an amazing Drawing Kenjie!
Although what is the feather thing hes....ohhh its smoke. oops my bad! sorry!!!!! but i think a bit more detail on the smoke will make it seem as if he really is smoking a cig. an not a feather.
Maybe some wisps would be good, or something like making the coloring different. like maybe grey? or a wispy white color like cream? hmmmm many ideas of color for the smoke come to my mind.
other than that it is flawless<3
Good Job Kenji and keep making more amazing drawings!!!!
-your foxy fan, -Red =) (Firey-Fox) =3
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~obnoxiousdh Jun 7, 2012
epic!!!!!! find a way to get ur comic on tv yo, i totally support u
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~Medallion2012 May 30, 2012
He looks pretty cool! Doesn't look much like a jerk, but I guess you don't have to look like one to be one. ;)
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Mood: Joy ~deadmanarts May 28, 2012
i approve greatly. APPROVAL. but im not sure how i feel about his shoes....
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~davidpburnettjr May 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Dig the art style and the character design.
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*Sharkberry May 9, 2012  Student Filmographer
MAN! thislooksgood
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~EstherLR May 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh man, procrastination is KEY in any of these things. Procrastination is horrible but amazing too >.<
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*Pug-In-The-Mug May 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nicey!
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=avancna May 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sideburns are a plus.
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~bord2heck May 8, 2012
idk, i think its just the pose, but his face doesn't look dumb or like he's gonna cheat me. more helpful than hurtful, i guess. or is that what you were going for? hmm... lol other than that it looks great.
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~jr2crazy May 8, 2012
Smoking a cigarette only looks cool when a skinny teenager does it.
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